Earlier today, I published an essay about testing (“The Voice of a Data-Point”) by a sixth-grade student, Noa Rosinplotz. Her story was so thoughtful and well-written that some commenters could not believe it was written by a sixth grade student. I emailed Noa and asked her to read the comments and respond. This is what she wrote:
“This is Noa, original writer of the letter. I’m responding to all the comments that I’m not actually in sixth grade or that someone else wrote my letter for me. While my mom did read what I wrote, to make sure it wasn’t “obnoxious” (as she put it), she didn’t make any written edits and I wrote the letter entirely by myself. I used other sources, like Diane Ravitch’s book, for information, but every word in the letter not in quotation marks was entirely my own. The fact that I’m not a certified adult educator shouldn’t make people doubt the authenticity of my letter, it should make what I write all the more accurate, as a student taking the tests. No one “guided my hand”, and protesting standardized tests was my idea and my idea only. I love to write and to make my ideas public, and I thought that if anyone was going to pay attention to my letter, I had to make it as mature and detailed as possible. I wrote a few letters to DCPS in response to their tests at the end of last year, and when I received no response, decided to make my opinions more public. I’m very interested in No Child Left Behind, especially because I’ve never experienced school without standardized tests. It’s not weird that I’M interested in researching tests, it’s weird that adults who have never taken them are. In response to “sixth graders just don’t write this way”, they obviously do, since I’m a sixth grader.”

Diane,
I just had an idea. Maybe Randi Kaye can host you, Noa and her mom. She can hold up Noa’s piece of writing and discuss the state of our public schools nowadays.
Noa, consider sending your letter to Arne Duncan and President Obama please.
Fat chance! Not Randi Kaye. Noa should be on The Daily Show.
Great idea…Jon Stewart would love her!
I was recalling the poorly written piece that Randi aired to shame all of us. I suspect the Rheeject arranged that episode.
Diane, I think both of her parents have been on the Comedy Channel already. It runs in the family
What’s a way to get it to Arne Duncan that he won’t ignore it? I’m sure any listed emails for him will be for work, and he probably gets bombarded with emails he never looks at. It’s worth a try, though.
Noa, I think your post on this blog might make it to Arne Duncan’s desk. Just a sneaking suspicion.
You could always tweet it to him.
Noa,
I sometimes wonder about the old fashioned snail mail. I have sent letters before to state and federal representatives and I have always received a response. It is worth a try. Also, I sent my letters in scarlet red envelopes:
The Department’s U.S. Postal Service mailing address is:
Arne Duncan, Secretary of Education
U.S. Department of Education
400 Maryland Avenue, SW
Washington, D.C. 20202
Best of luck to you!
Hmmm…the so-called experts criticize us (teachers) for doing a poor job of teaching, yet when a sixth grader writes as eloquently as Noa, she and her teachers are not given credit or respect. The irony is palpable.
Isn’t her name Noa Rosin Plotz (that’s how she herself wrote it in the original letter)? Why do you keep running her last name together?
My last name is Rosinplotz. DCPS, ever since I started kindergarten, has spelled it Rosin Plotz, for reasons unknown. That’s how I appear on the tests, which is why I spelled it that way in the story. Just another example of the horrors of standardized tests: the instructions say “check to make sure your name is correct on the answer sheet.” I say that my name is wrong each time, to no avail.
I had to admit, that I too was wondering about whether this was a 6th grader or not. I am not a teacher, but I am a pretty regular synagogue attendee on Saturdays, I get to hear one or two speeches a week by a nervous 13 year old. Chances are, Noa is working on her speech right now! I am always interested in what the Bar or Bat Mitzvah is going to say. As our Rabbi likes to say, “they are our teacher today.”
And every once in a while, you get a child who “hits it out of the ballpark.” So these kids exist. And Noa is one of them. This won’t be the first child of very accomplished parents in DC and Suburban Maryland to make a name for herself – especially since her name is the joining together of two names anyway!
In my town of Athens GA there is a tradition going back a few years of various smart and articulate, elementary, middle and high school students writing letters to the editor. Whenever they do, quite a few online anonymous “commenters” like to say “they obviously couldn’t have written that.” Of course these online commenters are also the ones who don’t believe in them guvmint schools, so the well-reasoned and cogent letters by the kids sort of disprove their narrative. So they resort to these cowardly and pathetic accusations. (Meanwhile the kids tend to grow up and go on to major colleges and national awards and scholarships as products of our “struggling” local schools).
I say keep it up Noa– speak out and speak up! Your voice, and many others of all ages in every corner of the country, will hopefully someday resonate with the people in power who continue to pass policies that undermine and weaken our public education system. You are an inspiration and an example and please remember: don’t let the jerks get you down!
More importantly, who cares how old she is? Why can’t people focus on the arguments she’s making, instead of on the person who’s making them?
Thank you.
“It’s not weird that I’M interested in researching tests, it’s weird that adults who have never taken them are.” Noa Rosinplotz
Thank you, Noa. This quote inspires me to keep fighting the big bucks testing sham(e).