Jonathan Lovell teaches writing at San Jose State in California. A few weeks ago, he sent me a couplet from Alexander Pope to steel me when angry critics lash out. These were the lines:
“Yes, I am proud; I must be proud to see
Men, not afraid of God, afraid of me.”
I met Jonathan in Berkeley last week and signed his book. He wrote a few days later that he had been reading the book aloud to his wife, a practice they both enjoyed, reading and discussing. And he sent this note:
I’ve been searching my mind for a way to adequately describe the impact of listening to this book read aloud, slowly, chapter by chapter.
Here’s the best analogy I could summon, with the gravest of apologies to John Keats:
On First Looking into Ravitch’s *Reign of Error*
Much have I travell’d in education’s realm
And men like Cremin hold in high esteem.
Round many an author have I plied my helm,
And some have made me weep, and others, dream.
But of a wide expanse had I been told
Which one called Ravitch held with sway supreme.
Some travell’d there, its wonders to behold,
And many found their thinking newly clean.
Yet did I never breathe its pure serene
Till I heard Error speak out loud and bold;
Then felt I like some watcher in the skies
When a new planet swims into his ken;
Or like Balboa, when with eagle eyes,
He stared at the Pacific. Just so your fans
Now view each other with a wild surmise,
Silent, upon a peak in Darien.
With both affection and regard,
Jonathan
Can there be any greater reward for a writer than such a response? I think not.

TThanks very much, Diane. Your book deserves this response and more. I intended the “fans/Darien” rhyme at the end, changing it from the Keats’ “men/Darien” rhyme, because I enjoyed thinking about a group of wives of Darien CT corporate types, all having read your book in their “book club” (hah!), then gathering at a local hillside in speechless wonder. And who knows, stranger things have happened in this world, have they not?
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What a delight!
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Thanks Robert. That’s a high compliment coming from one of the most astute commenters on this blog!
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I read this with glee. What a tribute to you, Diane.
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Thanks Yvonne. It made me smile as well, as I was composing it.
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Wow! Your very own poem! You are right. It was and is high praise and fun, too. Good writing melts in my mouth.
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Thanks 2old2tch. It melts in mine as well, although I have to confess that Keats’ “On First Looking Into Chapman’s Homer” melts a whole lot more readily in my mouth than my own poor imitation of this great poem. The important thing is that the words do convey just how important, how “loud and bold” Diane is speaking in her wonderful, wonderful book.
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Thanks 2old2tch. It melts in mine as well, although I have to confess that Keats’ “On First Looking Into Chapman’s Homer” melts a whole lot more readily in my mouth than my own poor imitation of this great poem. The important thing is that the words do convey just how important, how “loud and bold” Diane is speaking in her wonderful, wonderful book.
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High praise indeed, of which you are certainly worthy… 🙂
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Thanks James. It’s Keats, really, that deserves the praise. And of course Diane for opening this particular “channel door.”
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Beautiful. I am no poet, but these words express my sentiment building…Diane, you are truly deserving of such poesy. We are all fortunate that you work toward the goal of exposing the charlatans and schooling them on what can be done for a better future when most of us are limited by our time and expertise on such matters. I cannot wait to see you in Princeton.
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