Friends and readers, many years ago I worked for a small magazine. Once in a while, we would receive a submission from a completely unknown writer. We said “it came over the transom.” Now to understand the expression, you have to know what a transom is. It’s the movable glass panel on a hinge over the door. You left it open to get air circulation, in the days before air-conditioning. So, if you worked in this little magazine, you might have an article literally tossed over the transom, unsolicited. Who knew? Maybe it would be the next great American author.
So I got this strange article over the transom (and I don’t have one). I have no idea what it’s about but I laughed out loud. Maybe you will too. The author requested anonymity.
Here goes:
America For America
When my family joined the program, I thought being a host sister would be a life-changing event. I’d grown up watching reruns of The Wire and Yo Teach! and I’ve just always felt like I wanted to do my part. For the past two years I’ve been part of the program, I’ve agreed to share my room if the 5th grade student we host is a girl, but naturally a boy student stays with my younger brother. Right now we have a boy, which I’m glad about because I’m exhausted by the added Talk Time™ that comes with waking up and falling asleep with a student sharing my room. Honestly, the prescribed Good mornings! How did you sleep? the Would you like to use the bathroom first or shall I? And that’s the easy stuff! My phone’s app tracks my talk and presents me with endless incentives to make the student Stretch It™ even when we’re just watching one half hour of Roku together before bed. I don’t care if she can extend her response to my open-ended question about Taylor Swift’s analysis of this week’s International Idol contestants. Can’t we just agree Taylor Swift is a has-been and her red lipstick way too much?
But we can’t ever agree–it’s in my family’s contract. We have to Push™ the student to argue until she wins the argument or until she starts to cry. It’s sort of new, this whole Push™ thing. Before that, we just had to ask a simple question, get a response, then evaluate it. I think we called it IRE™ after Bob Marley. Such an amazing guy. So now agreeing to disagree isn’t okay in the program either. That’s actually the tablet example of lowering expectations for our host student– and families who lower them get kicked out of the America For America (AFA) program and if that happens I can’t get into Brown.
In the mornings I am always reminding the student to put on her belt, get her reading log signed and find and sharpen her five pencils. The pencils are such a pain because she keeps forgetting to empty the electric sharpener, which means I have to do it and then I have to take dollars off her Allowance™. I’m not a fan of the Allowance™ but it’s mandatory for us. When friends ask why my parents, brother and I are always fiddling with the Allowance™ tracking app our phones, my Dad explains that Accountability™ is one of AFA’s five pillars which means we have to monitor all our student’s actions, words, body language, half-thoughts, full-thoughts and utterances. We record positive behaviors by adding dollars when she does things like clear her place or Stretches It™ without being asked. (Sometimes I just add dollars for not leaving toothpaste in the sink. As an AFA family I’m proud to say we focus on the positive.) On the flip side, we remove dollars when the student forgets to empty the pencil sharpener, talks too loudly at our dinner table or in the car, forgets to support an argument with evidence, doesn’t show an appropriate amount of Gratitude™ for being in our home or lacks Grit™ when helping my brother rake the leaves.
Once we had a friend over for dinner who asked my Dad to explain Enrichment™. My Dad said, basically, if the student slips and says Don’t nobody or Imma (not that they all talk like that but most of them do) then she eats dinner alone at the old desk in the guest bedroom downstairs. When she’s done eating there’s an app she plays for an hour called SpeakUp!©It’s on both the student’s and my Dad’s phones and tracks when she makes mistakes speaking proper English. The app, SpeakUp!©, feeds her a variety of games to learn the right way to talk. It’s really fun and the graphics are awesome. After an hour of practice, she comes back upstairs and shows her mastery. Then he always says I’m proud of you because you worked so hard at that. For some people it’s really confusing why he says that, but my Dad shouldn’t ever tell her she’s smart or else she’ll grow a Fixed Mindset™ and then we’ll get kicked out of the program.
That night, after my Dad explained Enrichment™, the friend got upset and left. We didn’t hear from her again but then she called last week. I guess she has a two-year old daughter now and was looking for programs. My Dad offered some advice about demonstrating Zest™ and Optimism™ in the application process, but I don’t think she has what it takes. Besides, it’s not like it’s 2018 anymore. Everyone’s applying to America For America now.
Isn’t this a satire about KIPP?
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Sounds to me like a parody of a KIPP™/Teach for America™ spawn from a futuristic, corporate sponsored Home Premium™ version of the ReformLand© ap
I think the use of caps and trade mark™ and copyright© symbols for ordinary words and catch phrases is a clever way to demonstrate how those programs are laden with dogma and capitalize monetarily by claiming ownership of some rather common practices and vernacular, like “Allowance™” and “SpeakUp!©”, as if they invented them –and even though they say they are Charities™
Or maybe I’m using my All© ap to Read™ too much into it…
Argosy Collegiate Charter School’s Carolina?
I prefer my IRTNOG™ with tons a rum …
tons a rum tum tum …
Excellent over-the-transom satire! i love how ir takes you right into this bizarre (and recognizable) scenario without explanation.
I would not be surprised if some of the terms in this piece were really trademarked. Accountable Talk is.
http://blog.coreknowledge.org/2009/01/04/class-discussion-for-sale/
Please someone explain how you put that little trademark (TM) next to a word! I don’t know how to do it.
Here’s how you do it in Word (and then you can paste it into your blog):
1. Type TM right after the word (with no space in between).
2. Select those two letters: TM.
3. Open up your Font toolbar (near the top of the page), select a smaller font size (size 10 if your regular font is 12) and check the “superscript” box.
4. When you click “OK,” you will see the result.
Select those two letters…
Hi Diane,
The ‘™’ is a single character. There’s no way to delete the ‘M’ without making the ‘T’ go away.
In Microsoft Word, from the “insert” menu, chose the symbol button and select the trademark symbol
Well, my approach works too (in Word and HTML), but you’re right–the special character is handier, and it automatically comes in the right size.
I posted a couple of reference links, but they got trapped somewhere.
Here’s the short version:
The HTML code for the trademark symbol is “™”
Special characters in HTML are coded with an initial ampersand and terminating semicolon. The blog software seems to not process HTML codes for special characters but appears to be letting special characters through directly. Here’s allowance six ways (we’ll see what works):
Direct from the post: Allowance™
Escaped as HTML: Allowance™
As seen raw: Allowance\231
Using the raw decimal escaped: Allowanceç
With registered trademark decimal escape: Allowance®
With registered trademark decimal: Allowance™
From Microsoft Word: Allowance™
My guess is the original was prepared in word (there the trademark is available from symbol button of the insert tab). The blog software seems to handle that character encoding by default.
The second occurrence of the work “registered” is a cut and paste error.
The HTML code for the trademark symbol is “™”
Not what Jon said. What he said was:
The HTML code for the trademark symbol is “™”
So what he wrote (to say that) was:
The HTML code for the trademark symbol is “™”
(Because the ampersand needs an escape so its’ not interpreted as part of the ™ escape.
I just copied and pasted™ directly from your message above, which I find to be the easiest approach.
I’m having trouble getting links through this blog’s spam filter, so try the reference links at the top of my “Toolbox” page:
So apropos!
There’s an app for that!