Robert Shepherd explains his negative view of the Common Core standards:
One topic that rarely gets discussed in the debate about the new standards [sic] is their poor quality. If these had been handed me by a graduate student as, say, a thesis project, I would have told her that they were not yet of acceptable quality for bringing before a committee.
These standards [sic] just weren’t thought through carefully. Let’s look at one standard [sic], which I have chosen completely at random:
RL.11-12.5 Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure specific parts of a text (e.g., the choice of where to begin or end a story, the choice to provide a comedic or tragic resolution) contribute to its overall structure and meaning as well as its aesthetic impact.
First, this standard [sic] flies in the face of a century of work in hermeneutics, the theory of interpretation, in its assumption (big assumption!) that an author’s choices are a proper object of study. This is an extremely controversial position, but it is taken for granted in the standard [sic]. E. D. Hirsch stood almost alone, throughout much of the past century, in his heroic defense of the author’s choices, or intentions, as proper objects of scholarly attention. During that time, many scholars and critics, perhaps most professional literary people, contended that the author’s choices, or intentions, were irrelevant or irrecoverable or both and that we must attend, instead,
- to the text itself (Ransom, Tate, Empson, Brooks, Warren, Wimsatt, Beardsley, and others of the New Critical school; Propp, Jakobson, Stith Thompson, Levi-Strauss, and other Formalists and Structuralists);
- to the reader’s construction of the text (in their various ways, Barthes, Fish, Rosenblatt, Derrida, and other Reader Response, Postmodernist, and Deconstructionist critics); or
- to historically determined responses to the text and differences in these over time (Heidegger, Gademer, Foucault, Greenblatt, and other Historicist and new Historicist critics).
It’s fairly typical of these standards [sic] to be worded in complete obliviousness of the fact that people have thought pretty seriously about literature over the past hundred and fifty years and have, in the course of all that, learned a few things.
Second, why, at this level (Grades 11 and 12) are students being asked to concentrate, in particular, on the structures of specific parts of a text? Would it make more sense, instead, to address overall structure at these grade levels, building upon analyses of structures of specific parts of texts done at earlier grade levels? Was this possibility considered? Certainly, there is much that we know about structure in texts that is quite important to the interpretation of works of all kinds, literary and otherwise, that is never addressed anywhere in the standards [sic]. Unfortunately, the standards [sic] do not build in students, over time, familiarity with many extremely common structural patterns–episodic structure, cyclical structure, choral structure, the five-act play, the monomyth, the three unities–one could make a long list.
Shouldn’t this be the time, at the end of the K-12 program, to sum up what has been learned in earlier grades about specific literary structures, to draw some broad conclusions about common overall literary structures and their determinative influence on the making of literary works? Do we want to make sure, before they graduate, that students understand the basics of conventional plot structure? Shouldn’t we review that because it is so fundamental and because this is our last chance to do so before we ship kids off into their post-secondary colleges and careers? Again, were such questions considered? I doubt it.
Third, aren’t the relations of specific structure to a) overall structure, b) meaning, and c) aesthetic impact quite distinct topics of study? Why are they lumped together in this standard [sic]? Don’t these require quite a lot of unpacking? This is a common fault of the standards [sic]. They often combine apples and oranges and shoelaces and are ALL OVER THE PLACE with regard to their level of generality or specificity,. Often, there seems to be no rationale for why a given standard is extremely specific or extremely broad or, like this one, both, in parts.
Fourth, does it make sense, at all, to work in this direction, from general notions about literary works as expressed in a standard [sic] like this, rather than from specific case studies? Wouldn’t real standards be encouraging empirical, inductive thinking, beginning with specific works, with study of patterns of relationship in those works, and then and only then asking students to make generalizations or exposing them to generalizations made by knowledgeable scholars who have thought systematically about those patterns of relationship? Wouldn’t that be a LOT more effective pedagogically? Isn’t that what the Publishers’ Criteria say? Isn’t the overall apporach taken in these standards [sic] antithetical to the very “close reading” that they purport to encourage? Isn’t it true that by handing teachers and students nationwide a bunch of implicit generalizations like those in this standard [sic], the makers of the standards [sic] are encouraging uncritical acceptance of those generalizations about texts rather than an empirical approach that proceeds inductively, based on real analysis, to build understanding?
Fifth, what is meant by this word structure in the standard [sic]? The examples given (where the piece begins, comedic or tragic resolution) suggest that students are to analyze narrative structures, but there are many other kinds of structures in literary works. Are teachers to ignore those and concentrate on narrative structures? Was that among the “choices” that the authors of the standards made for the rest of us? What about rhetorical structures? metrical structures? logical structures? imitative or derivative structures based on forms in other media (e.g., John Dos Passos’s “Newsreels”)? Are teachers to ignore those? Is it unimportant for 11th- and 12th-grade students to learn about the reductio (Vonnegut’s Sirens of Titan or Bellow’s Henderson the Rain King); the thesis, antithesis, synthesis structure, or dialectic (Rebecca Goldstein’s Mazel); choral structure (The Book of Job, Antigone); metrical structures like formulaic oral composition (the Sundiata, the Iliad) or terza rima? The standards [sic] are shot through with such glaring lacunae. One asks oneself, reading them, why are students studying this, in particular, and not that? Why at this grade level? Why is this and this and this and this left out?
That’s a quick analysis of just one standard [sic], which I really did choose at random by glancing at a list of these on my desktop. And it’s one of the better ones.
What standards [sic] like these do is impose a regimen from the top that everyone must follow. This is what we have decided is important. All the stuff we left out is not. In this way, the standards [sic] discourage creative development of competing approaches that are better thought through, that are more in line with what is now known about the domains covered and about pedagogy in those domains. Standards [sic] like these–ones that are, de facto, mandatory–hamstring textbook writers, curriculum developers, and teachers, forcing them to address topics at random that are not part of a more carefully conceived overall learning progression.
Thank you for this very interesting analysis.
I see no problem with examining how structures within a text contribute to the larger structure and meaning. (Should one focus on the larger structures instead? It depends.) Yet I agree that this standard is clumsily and misleadingly worded.
An author’s “choices” are not the same as an author’s “intentions”–but there’s no need to bring up “choices” in the standard at all. it confuses the matter. Also, the “choice” of a “comedic or tragic resolution” isn’t really a structural choice. It has to do with the essence of the work.
None of this would be especially problematic if the standards were offered as guidelines only. Teachers could then improve upon them and use their best knowledge and judgment. The folly lies in the mandate.
Diana Senechal: thank you for your posting—and your blog.
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IMHO, the key to understanding the proposed Common Core Standards [CCS] lies in dealing with the [as far as I know, unstated] assumption that a critical mass of teachers at all levels lack “best knowledge and judgment.” If that is so, then rather than let the poor dears pathetically fail at their jobs—flopping around like fish out of water washed up on a beach—the key promoters of the CCS are [in their own view of themselves] graciously extending a helping hand in relieving educators of the arduous task of working their inadequate little brains up about how and what to teach to the students sitting in front of them.
Yes, I agree that the “folly lies in the mandate.” But it begins with the notion that the tighter the intellectual and pedagogical constraints on teachers, the greater freedom they have to make the ‘correct’ decisions.
Again, thank you for your postings and your blog.
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Yes, the mandate is foolish, but so are some of Coleman’s basic notions, such as “the four corners of the text” and his admonition against inviting students to connect their reading with prior experience. These are fundamental errors. They go against everything I’ve learned about literature (whether listening to M. H. Abrams or Jonathan Culler) and about reading instruction (whether listening to my eighth grade reading teacher or studying schema theory in grad school). Nothing in the entire CCS enterprise makes sense to me.
You are right, Diana, to point out that choices and intentions are not the same thing. One makes a choice because one has an intention. However, why concentrate on “the author’s intentions” if one has in mind, simply, what ends up present in the text unless one also means, what was chosen for the text in order to advance an intention? But again, you are right, Diana, to call me on this point, which I didn’t unpack in the brief essay. Thank you.
Sorry, my note was written in haste. Here, a revised version:
You are right, Diana, to point out that choices and intentions are not the same thing. One makes a choice because one has an intention. However, why concentrate on “the author’s choices” if one has in mind, simply, what ends up present in the text unless one also means, what was chosen for the text in order to advance an intention? But again, you are right, Diana, to call me on this point, which I didn’t unpack in the brief essay. Thank you for your perceptive comment!
Like Diana, I think that focusing on structural elements is perfectly defensible. How can you talk about a deus ex machina without it? This looks like a case of poor wording, not a poor concept.
I agree, Sherman. Getting kids to think about structural elements of a text is extremely valuable, especially since an understanding of these can be operationalized, turned into a set of procedures to carried out when they are creating texts of their own. But why the emphasis, here, on narrative structures, which is what seems to be implied? That kind of thing concerns me because publishers of texts, online materials, tend to try to hew closely to whatever the standard they are told to teach says, and as I point out, there are many, many types of structures in literary works that are not narrative structures. The more general problem that the promulgation of standards that are, de facto, mandatory, is that people who know their own students and their own subjects are robbed of the freedom to make decisions on their own about matters like this–what sorts of structures am I going to address with my students and why?
How dare all of you question the Standards developed by a testing entrepreneur who has never taught a day in his life?
Don’t you know that they were developed at the behest of some Very Important and Powerful People, and are a vehicle to further enrich them and assert their control, as is their Mammon-given and Meritocratic right?
Puny earthlings, resistance is futile…
RFLAMO
Oops, that would be RFLMAO!
Brilliant, could mot agree more!!!
But resistance is not futile! Standards and testing are being condemned widely. Being from the old world I am yet to hear that schools are teaching LITERATURE, not ELA and prepared to fight for that!
The big point of this critique isn’t whether structural elements and how they function in a text are worth studying. It’s that these “standards” are a mess. And now teachers, publishers, and students are expected to make sense of that mess. As the author points out, the “standards” promote certain ideas that are highly questionable, or at least tinged with implied ideologies.
All you need is one offhand critique of one of the “standards” to see that they’re half-baked and unlikely to “work” (for whatever unclear purposes). And yet we’re going to spend countless millions of tax dollars basing bad high-stakes tests on them. Those tests won’t just be hard. They’ll be stupid.
(Check out the sample tenth grade test items using an excerpt from Ovid and a poem by Denise Levertov–wish I could find the link–bad on many levels.)
Here is the link:
http://www.parcconline.org/parcc-model-content-frameworks
“This is what we [the makers of the supposed standards] have decided is important. All the stuff we left out is not.”
And that gets at the crux of the problem, much as in the main stream media and commentariat, that what is left out is unimportant, that we, the deciders will determine what you will know. I’m amazed by how many teachers I talk to who have no clue who the Rheeject is, what is happening in public education with the Common Corporate [not]-State Standards and the accompanying tests and judgements rendered upon the students, teachers and schools. Part if it is due to being too busy with all the administrative mandates of constant flavor of the month “professional development” and [false] “data driven decision making” to have time to actually read about what is going on. Keep the worker bees so busy they don’t have time to think about the crap that is laid upon them. That, and it seems to me, most teachers’ innate desire to go along to get along and not “rock the boat”.
Most of the time what is left unsaid is the most important information that one needs to make educated decisions.
Also, many teachers in comfortable districts simply are unaware because it has not been touching them as directly. I myself was quite ignorant about the “rheeform” movement until I applied for a job in a low SES district awhile back, and started doing some homework. I felt like one of those guys in Plato’s allegory of the cave.
“Second, why, at this level (Grades 11 and 12) are students being asked to concentrate, in particular, on the structures of specific parts of a text? Would it make more sense, instead, to address overall structure at these grade levels, building upon analyses of structures of specific parts of texts done at earlier grade levels? Was this possibility considered?”
Anyone who has ever had the distinct pleasure of teaching a subject area to children over the course of six years, i.e. elementary related arts teachers, knows that “rolling out” a course of study with a dependency on the skills and knowledge from previous study cannot be effectively done simultaneously.
To introduce common standards that depend on earlier learning, one must be certain that earlier learning has taken place. This is impossible to do without some reference to remedial work. However, remedial study takes away precious time from new learning. Therefore, the students in upper grades cannot get the full curriculum necessary to support the CC due to the time necessary to “fill in any gaps” from the previous so-called “inadequate content standards” that caused these “super heroes” to shove the common core in our faces to begin with.
It would have made far more sense for the introduction of a comprehensive and inter-connected overhaul of a curriculum connected to common standards to have been presented from the ground up adopting each grade level with each successive year of study. That is, begin your new curriculum in Kindergarten and the following year, pilot first grade, then in the third year, introduce second grade and so on.
In my district, an attempt to do this was made by targeting the K-1 population for the CC in the first year, however, the mandate requires that upper grade levels be indoctrinated in the second. So now, we have a forced curriculum on our 4th and 5th grade students with no basis in these standards before them. If this is how it must be introduced, then a process of amending each grade level standard needs to begin when the Kindergarten students from last year enter 4th grade since they will have a different version of background from the current 4th grade who did not have the CC from Kindergarten. Even the1st grade CC needs to be amended since a new crop of Kindergarteners entered this year with the CC apparently under their belts. Every district seems to be doing this differently. Has anybody considered this issue?
This is as I see it, too. Introduce the changes in K and build upon them. It would take a 13 year commitment to changes. It would provide more thorough study, application, and adjustments to the goals. A rush to judgment is not wise. Yet, somehow, we have been manipulated to believe these changes, as applied, are valid. Ludicrous!
I agree. Watching students get stuck into the middle of this core, without the assumed prior knowledge, is maddening. Kids are falling off the cliff and the powers that be do not seem to care.
I’m an elementary sped teacher trying to make some sense of CCSS. I just watched Coleman’s MLK lesson and I felt he came off as an effete Ivy League elitist…
We’ve been hearing a lot about “close reading” in our district and it now makes perfect sense that this is a New Criticism technique. Why did this movement’s ideas win out? Why is this being foisted upon our kids?
My favorite part of the new standards is not the standards themselves but the Publishers’ Guidance, precisely because that guidance emphasizes looking closely at texts and building generalizations from that close reading. However, I agree emphatically with you, KC, that this is ONE approach among many and that if we are going to adopt it, we should have a national discussion of why we are doing that. I happen to like the New Critical approach with kids because it encourages skepticism–the critical part of “critical thinking.” But there are other lessons to be learned about literature for which this approach is not ideal. Sometimes, for example, it makes sense to say, OK, here’s a broad pattern, and here are examples of it, and now, show me how these texts exemplify it, or here is one of the reasons why people write–they have some moral aim in mind; they want to effect political or social change of some kind or have some common human concern. Let’s look at that for a while. Standards have a way of becoming a hammer that treats everything as if it were a nail.
First, THANK YOU Robert and Diane for writing and running this analysis. There has been essentially no public intellectual analyses of the specific ELA standards, at least that I can find, and I’ve been looking.
Diana beat me to my first point, which is that “choices” is not synonymous with “intent.” It seems to be a feint in the direction of either the direction of authorial intent or perhaps to emphasize the connection between reading and writing — reminding teachers and students that they will make similar choices as writers. I agree with Diana that the proper reading is to ignore the phrase — given the larger context it adds nothing.
Robert’s point about overall sequencing would be stronger if he also cited the preceding 9th and 10th grade standard:
“Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure a text, order events within it (e.g., parallel plots), and manipulate time (e.g., pacing, flashbacks) create such effects as mystery, tension, or surprise. ”
There’s not a clear progression here. The 9th and 10th grade standard seems more rigorous in some ways — analyzing parallel plots vs. the beginning and ending point of a story. There are good arguments that these could be flip-flopped, or re-arranged internally.
For that matter, here’s grade 6:
“Analyze how a particular sentence, chapter, scene, or stanza fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of the theme, setting, or plot.”
I would argue that the high school standards do not represent five or six years of progression from that point, IF a sixth grader can actually meet that standard with the texts they are supposed to read at that level under CCSS.
And the “College and Career Readiness Standard” from which all this is derived:
“Analyze the structure of texts, including how specific sentences, paragraphs, and larger portions of the text (e.g., a section, chapter, scene, or stanza) relate to each other and the whole.”
This reads as LESS rigorous than the specific high school level standards. Closer really to the middle school standards. This is very basic and baffling conceptual problem throughout the ELA CCSS.
Ultimately, the issue is not if these are reasonable tasks in general. They are. The sequencing and precise descriptions are problematic.
To me, however, the biggest question is whether or not this exact task is as singularly important as the CCSS makes it. For many literary texts there will only be five applicable standards, which only vary incrementally from year to year. If one really believes this is a good approach — it is very different than that of high performing countries — one must at least concede that these standards and tasks should be exceptionally well thought out, tested, and implemented. Instead, the details are often haphazardly assembled.
One last thing — if David Coleman and Susan Pimentel are really the authors of this text, they should be able to explain why they personally made the sorts of choices we’re talking about. The authors are not dead in this case. I think what they would tell you is that of course standards are not written by two people, they are written by committees with a variety of political, ideological and intellectual demands and requirements. They’ve made a lot of hay over being the “authors” of these standards, but that is rather clearly a sham.
If that’s not the case, perhaps they would like to explain, in detail, their specific choices.
Thank you, Tom, for your insightful comments. In particular, thank you for pointing out that there are very few standards per grade level, all related to a very few overall standards, and that if that is going to be the case, these need to be “exceptionally well thought out, testing, and implemented.” What I see when I look at these standards is a narrowing of the vast field of possible studies in English to a few themes that would not, necessarily, be the ones that I would have chosen or that would have been chosen if there had been a nationwide dialogue among teacher/scholars about what should be addressed. For example, I am saddened that one of the recurring themes in these standards isn’t the monomyth and associated archetypal characters. That would be a powerful topic to pursue over the course of a K-12 education! But the lit standards seem, to me, quite a bit better than the writing, language, vocabulary, and speaking and listening standards, which are extraordinarily conventional and uninformed by what is now known about language acquisition. To give a few examples: I very much fear that the repetition year after year of three modes in the writing standards (narrative writing, informative writing, argument) will lead to a lot of writing of five-paragraph themes. Wouldn’t it be wise to have students work from highly specific models of highly specific types of writing, ones that could be operationalized (e.g., this is one way to write a press release or an explication de texte or a fairy tale), The language standards chosen for focus at each grade level seem to have been chosen pretty much at random, and they evince no understanding of the essential role of exposure to spoken language with increasingly sophisticated grammatical structure to the acquisition of an internal grammar. The vocab standards fail to reflect the crucial understanding that most vocabulary is not learned through explicit instruction but through exposure to a lot of new, related vocabulary in a particular semantic domain that is meaningful to the individual (e.g., you take a painting class and in the course of a week learn the meanings of “gesso,” “Filbert brush,” “stippling,” “chiaroscuro,” and “Durer square.” The speaking and listening standards don’t address, at all, specific standards that would make possible attainment of the general standards–techniques for discussion and negotiation, for example; or aspects of spoken presentation–facial expressions, body language, pace, volume, emphasis/stress, variation, proximity to audience; or common rhetorical techniques or types of visual aids. In fact, the writing, language, and speaking and listening standards appear to have been rushed, as though the writers of the standards were under a deadline and decided, simply, to repeat themselves, for the most part, from level to level without doing any careful analysis of the domains.
To Robert: Even in your correct observations of this, how does a district/system address all these deep changes without building the basic foundation prior to testing. Our district spent so much time finding ways to expose younger and younger children to overwhelming amounts of expectations that we were teaching two curricula at once, one for the test and one for the established objectives of our district. We were constantly trying to provide support for the next grade level in order to make up for the fact that background and developmentally appropriate expectations were “skipped” in the demands of the ever-evolving “standards”. I do NOT know how these can be applied to, say, high school students in districts with a high level of poverty, little parental guidance and support, and poor learning outcomes in their schools from the onset.
Robert, thank you for articulating, and Diane, thank you for posting this important topic. in almost three years of working with the standards I have not heard one person discuss the standards in this way. I’m especially pleased that you mentioned the writing standards, which do not address analysis specifically, and I fear this is intended by the CCSS writers. Analysis, as you know, is critical for college success. Please continue your wonderful analysis of the standards. Many teachers are too overwhelmed to have the time to read what the standards actually say.
Debbie, one comment in your reply strikes me with particular resonance: : “I do NOT know how these can be applied to, say, high school students in districts with a high level of poverty, little parental guidance and support, and poor learning outcomes in their schools from the outset.” There are no standardized kids. Different kids, different needs, but instead of being free to think about their kids and what those needs are, everyone is forced by a single set of standards to concentrate on what those say to the exclusion of meeting those particular needs. Let’s think about one issue: Vocabulary. We know that kids from lower-socioeconomic-strata homes are exposed to exponentially less vocabulary than are their brothers and sisters from more affluent environments. And we also know that most vocabulary is learned implicitly from the spoken environment rather than through explicit instruction. So, one might decide to do interventions specifically addressed to mimic what those kids missed–those linguistically rich spoken language environments. That would require a major rethinking of the curriculum based on the needs of one’s specific student population. But one isn’t free to do that kind of thinking if one must hew to the standards and to the test. I feel you pain, being expected to make sure that every student gets the same stuff, having to meet all these demands, having to focus on some list of requirements as opposed to having the freedom to think hard about what’s best for your own students.
“. . . a narrowing of the vast field of possible studies . . .” That’s one big reason “standards” schemes of this kind are a bad idea in the first place. That they were rushed into being and inadequately tested goes without saying, but I’m glad somebody’s saying it. (Susan Ohanian has some of the most incisive comments on this travesty on her blog.) As for the New Criticism, because it was invented many decades ago as a reaction to prevailing critical methods, it doesn’t take into account all the correctives of the critical theories that followed and that were in part reacting to it. As for a the formalist approach that admits no reference to the time frame and conditions under which a text was produced (and is more or less demanded by Coleman), that approach has been thoroughly debunked and had virtually disappeared, only to be revived by Coleman. And now English teachers are going to be forced to pretend the last fifty years of English studies never happened? I don’t get it. What I do get is that consultants, publishers, and are already cleaning up. Coleman cashed in, too. By the way, the commenter who was glad that the multiple choice tests were being replaced should read a book called Making the Grade. It’s all about working for a big test company. Not a pretty picture.
Maybe I am thinking too simplistically, but when I began reading this standard and the questions being raised, I immediately thought to apply this standard to the Bible. I would say that we haven’t come to agreement upon the authors’ intentions. Hence, we have a multitude of denominations with disagreement among individual churches and congregation members as to ITS meaning. So, how do we categorically “score” students’ answers on such debatable determinations.
I also remember listening to (I believe) poet laureate, Billy Collins, saying that he was in a college level classroom that was having a discussion about the meaning of one of his poems. He was there anonymously. He was told that his interpretation an understanding of the poem was incorrect. Go figure.
Watching The Mastets” yesterday, I saw a commercial from Exxon stating how we all should get behind the common core. Can you imagine the audacity? What does Exxon know about teaching, students, or public education?
Robert: Yes, that was my initial reason for commenting. These tests were purportedly designed to alleviate inequities in educational opportunity and success, especially among students in deprived socio-economic areas. I find that we are leaving more and more of these students behind. (In light of NCLB, how ironic.) We are continuing to “put the cart before the horse” and it feels like a set-up or conspiracy to cause public schools to fail. (I normally don’t subscribe to conspiracy theories.)
In addition, I sometimes find that the views of those writing the standards do not take into consideration that, in particular, the education of elementary teachers does not necessarily include the in-depth knowledge of every subject area. Often, there are teachers in high school and higher education that seem to live and breathe a particular subject area. They have spent years focusing on the subject for which they feel a passion. When elementary teachers look at the common core, we see that we DO have short-comings because we were not able to focus on every subject area with the intensity needed to deliver it to such levels of specificity. We have been focusing on the whole child and upon developmental readiness. To suddenly have the need for all teachers to be “Renaissance men and women” is a high expectation, indeed. We have been asked to focus on things outside our interest levels and skill levels since our education has been broad rather than deep into one area.
Beyond that, I believe that it is peculiar that we have an urgent need to prepare every student for college while costs are soaring and jobs available upon graduation are of limited availability.
Back in my days as a doctoral student of literature in the mid-’70s, I read (in a course on the history of literary criticism) an essay by E D Hirsch that convinced me that he was perfectly willing to ignore most, if not all, of the literary criticism that emerged from the New Critics movement. I find nothing heroic about his stance and am puzzled by the use of that word in the critique.
That said, in hindsight I saw it as predictable that a person who advocated the notion that the author’s intent was THE definitive critical stance on a text (regardless of the fact that not even the author if HE – let’s face it: not many women make it into the literary/cultural pantheon of Mr. Hirsch and his Core Knowledge pals – were available to ask, can state definitively what the intention was at the time of creation or aver that his own view of the work hasn’t evolved over time) would eventually come out with a bunch of tomes on what comprises “cultural literacy” and what everyone’s Nth grader “should” know.
No one will ever accuse Mr. Hirsch (at UVa, where he teaches, male professors prefer that title, since anyone can earn a Ph.D, but you have to be BORN a gentleman. I have that on good authority from several former UVa professors, not all of whom viewed that philosophy without a sense of irony and humor) of having a small ego or lack of world-class chutzpah, least of all I. His alliance with the educational reactionary groups Mathematically Correct and NYC-HOLD during the Math Wars in the 1990s and since in many ways gives away his game, regardless of his professed liberal Democrat politics. I’ve heard similar claims from some of the most obviously conservative and reactionary members of those two groups, even as they’ve consistently attacked W. J. Clinton, Gore, Kerry, H.R. Clinton, Obama, and such issues as affirmative action (which they call “liberal racism”), global warming (doesn’t exist, in their view), the teaching of evolution in K-12 (why put that sort of controversy into play?), cultural diversity (fits so well with the likes of Mr. Hirsch’s views to attack that, of course), and other things vaguely left of center. I never realized that voting for Reagan, Bush I, Bush II (twice each), McCain, and Romney comprised typical liberal Democratic voting patterns. And of course, EDH is another such liberal. In his mind, if not mine.
Personal disclosure: I was admitted to the doctoral program in literature at UVa for the start of the 1976-77 academic year, having applied there at the urging of Doug Day, a National Book Award-winning literature professor there from whom I took at course when he was a visiting prof. at U of Florida in ’75-’76. However, I had enough warnings about Hirsch and a few like him and how I’d be perceived by them that I decided to stay put. I am pretty sure I could never have qualified as their flavor of gentleman.
As standards go … not bad. The problem is the notion of standards themselves:
http://facultytrustee.blogspot.com/2013/04/standards-s.html
The standards [sic] are not the worst I’ve seen, and they are not the best. But that’s not the big problem. The big problems are these:
a) there are no standardized kids–learning progressions and curricula and pedagogy need to be based on the needs of particular students and not the other way around;
b) standards that are, de facto, mandatory have an extraordinarily chilling effect on subsequent pedagogical and curricular innovation. It’s a terrible irony that many businesspeople champion these, for those people ought to know better than anyone else what comes of having competing models;
c) these standards [sic] reflect neither current best practices in English language arts education nor current scientific knowledge in the domains that they touch upon (e.g., child language acquisition)
Voluntary, competing standards should be welcomed and subject to ongoing, continual debate. Make them mandatory and high stakes and you have a recipe for disaster.
Common Core is really about the selling of student data:
http://whatiscommoncore.wordpress.com/2013/03/20/white-house-hosts-datapalooza-built-on-common-core-tests/
“Did you see the recent view that Missouri Education Watchdog has taken on “Datapalooza” at the White House? Most telling is a pleasant sounding speech by eScholar CEO Shawn T. Bay, given at the White House, in which he states that although aggregate data (not individual) is useful, it’s most useful to look at the individual consumer or the individual student. He says, too, that Common Core is so important to the open data movement, because it’s “the glue that actually ties everything together.”
Common Core tests begin in 2014. The tests are to be the vehicle for the nationwide student data collection, both academic and nonacademic. Without Common Core, the federal and corporate invasion of privacy could not be effective. I do not think many people, including the speaker in this video, understand the underhanded (nonconsensual) alterations to privacy law of the Department of Education.”
When I hit the word “hermeneutics” I knew I was in for a depressing ride where my ignorance of all that modern knowledge about language acquisition to which Dr. Shepherd so energetically alludes would make me feel inferior.
This standard is so “old school” that even a run of the mill country high school teacher like myself could make something of it, using say OEDIPUS THE KING, or THE ILIAD, or GREAT EXPECTATIONS. It was what I was taught in college 60 years ago, and it was going out of style even then in favor of the new European approaches (e.g. Derrida). But I didn’t “keep up” on those new philosophies of literary analysis. And so had to rely on my own mere mother wit applied to A MIDSUMMER NIGHT’S DREAM (parallel plots) and looking for the fundamental moral metaphor in traditional literary works such as THE MERCHANT OF VENICE.
Dr. Shepherd is probably correct in pointing out that how well-off white kids actually get to a level of language facility such that they can even begin to consider narrative structure as an authorial choice is a good deal more complex and intensive than most people realize. Certainly it was in my case, and it took me years of reading and dictionary thumbing before I arrived at even my minimal level of competence. And in spite of that I wasn’t able to pass it on to my children. To do so requires a coherent high level literary culture, which we surely don’t have in this country any more, if we ever did.
Elementary school teachers without a taste for literature or an English major may have trouble with these standards. And I don’t quite see how requiring them will produce the education necessary, but it just might. Many won’t even be able to get on to the first rung of the ladder. This standard is pure Aristotle, but who even heard of him these days? Yes, this is the importation into the 21st century of the old time authoritarian synthesis of which Hirsch is the most notable spokesman. For myself, I am happy to see it come to life again. I thought it was dead forever. Dr. Shepherd implies, without the metaphor, that it is a zombie, but I call it the eternal vigor of common sense. It’s old, it’s elite, and it’s true. But since so few can actually achieve such high levels of thought, it probably will be a disaster when applied to the non-elite population, although my grandson is getting some of it in studying THE AENEID, and in a public school too. I’ve been impressed by his knowledge.
By the way, Dr. Shepherd, the [sic] should come after State rather than after Standards, to show that the Common Core is by no means a state standard but a national one. It should read, if we follow Susan Ohanian’s usage: The Common Core State [sic] Standards.
Harlen, thanks for your comments. One correction: I do not hold a doctorate. I’m just a fellow who likes to read and to think and learn about teaching well, a subject that has “the fascination of what’s difficult,” to use Yeats’s lovely phrase. That none of us has the answer with regard to what makes for good teaching is my more general point. We’ve all be lucky enough to be graced with some good teachers over the years, and if you experience was the same as mine, those teachers differed dramatically from one another. It’s a terrible mistake to try to standardize curricula, standardize kids, standardize teachers. We all know far too little to presume to do that.
Great that your grandson is having a profitable experience of the Aeneid. Warm regards.
The Common Core State Standards are not common, they were not developed by the states, and they aren’t well enough written to merit the name “Standards.” If these were voluntary, rough guides, and if educators had the freedom to treat them as such, then no damage done. This group thinks that this is a sensible learning progression and that these are skills and concepts worth treating. They also have this and that idea about what constitutes good teaching. All considered positions regarding these matters merit attention. But it’s another matter altogether to promulgate THE LIST that all must follow. When competing models are promulgated and debated, innovation occurs. When everyone has to follow the same one, well–didn’t work very well for the economy of the old Soviet Union, did it?
and as a fourth grade teacher being asked to make sense of these Common Core Standards and put them into some kind of sense for my students in the form of clear lessons and expectations… so many more questions than answers. One big question, the scary one, with so many interpretations how can anything be common? Thanks for sharing your example.
Longform.org posted Walter Kirn’s Lost in the Meritocracy; How I traded an education for a ticket to the ruling class today. Thought you might enjoy this…
http://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2005/01/lost-in-the-meritocracy/303672/
An Excerpt…
I assumed that my classmates and I would study the classics and analyze their major themes, but instead we were buffeted, almost from day one, with talk of “theory,” whatever that was. The basic meanings of the poems, short stories, and plays drawn from the hefty Norton anthologies that anchored our entry-level reading lists were treated as trivial, almost beneath discussion; what mattered, we learned, were our “critical assumptions.” I, for one, wasn’t aware of having any. Until I was sixteen or so, my only reading had consisted of Hardy Boys mysteries, books on UFOs, world almanacs, a Time-Life history of World War II, and a handful of pulpy best sellers linked to movies (The Day of the Jackal and The Exorcist stand out), which I’d read for their sex scenes. I knew a few great authors’ names from scanning dust jackets in the town library and watching the better TV quiz shows, but the only serious novels I’d ever cracked were Moby-Dick and Frankenstein—both sold to me by a crafty high school teacher as gripping tales of adventure, which they weren’t.
There I much that I love in the general philosophy that informs the approach to reading literature and “informative” texts instantiated in the materials published incidentally to accompany the Common Core ELA standards–the emphasis on close reading, on doing “point of use” skills incidentally in response to particular passages in a text, on reading related texts in a discipline or domain, on not prejudicing a reading of a text before actual engagement with it through a lot of pointless prereading activities, on not making the reading of the text secondary to application of some general skill (“finding the main idea,” “making inferences”). I applaud all that. But here’s what happens when people issue these “standards,” these lists of skills and concepts to be covered: People treat THE LIST as a curriculum. They drill the first standard. Then the second. Then the third. And they pay very, very close attention to what the standard says and ignore anything that doesn’t happen to be on THE LIST. Doing that distorts the curricular materials produced in response to the standard. I’m not happy with the sloppiness of the standards, but the RL and RI standards are considerably better than are the writing, language, and speaking and listening standards. Those are simply dreadful and will result in a lot of dreadful teaching materials and lousy teaching–in a lot of memorization of lists of prefixes, suffixes, and roots, in the writing of a lot of five-paragraph themes. I’m sure that that’s not the intent of the authors of the standards, but that’s what’s going to happen, unfortunately.
It seems more than a little impudent to tell a nation of professional teachers, this is how to do your job. I know better than you how that should be done. This is THE WAY. Like it or leave.
Robert, what are your thoughts on the curriculum modules New YorkmState has posted for high school English?
http://engageny.org/sites/default/files/resource/attachments/9-12-ela-text-list.docx
I think, Sheery, that a lot of people will look at those lists and dismiss them, out of hand, as too difficult for their students. They will say, “My 9th graders are going to read Rilke’s Letters to a Young Poet? Plutarch’s Consolatio ad Uxorem? Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter? Orwell’s 1984? “The Short, Happy Life of Francis Macomber”? Give me a break. They can’t read the side of a cereal box. Seriously, I myself find these texts challenging to read. What on Earth will my students be able to make of them?”
I understand that response. Texts like those pose many readability problems, and those problems vary widely. Getting a grip on Rilke’s letters requires having some sense of (and caring to have some sense of) the social milieu in which he was writing, one in which there was a high literary culture and an idealized, distinct vocation of “the man of letters,” as people of the time would have put it. How is a kid to relate to that? Understanding the Hemingway story requires those thirteen- and fourteen-year-old kids to be able to relate to the travails of a middle-aged man in the light of the narrator’s particular socially conditioned and constructed views of masculinity and of what the pursuit of happiness, of value in life, ought, rightfully, to mean to a man, given those values. Given the right translation, the language of the Plutarch piece might be fairly accessible, though the sentences tend to be quite long, but Plutarch’s point of view in this letter will seem, I suspect, to most students quite alien. Many haven’t grown up in a culture as inured to suffering as Plutarch’s was, one in which, for example, the death of a child was lamentable but commonplace. And are fourteen year olds going to be able to relate to the issues of marital relations that Plutarch’s letter raises? The Hawthorne presents considerable problems with regard to syntax and vocabulary. Almost every sentence requires unpacking for most young readers. Forget about understanding the novel as a whole. Pull a sentence from it. Go through it with students. The chances are that it will be too complex syntactically for them to unpack. If an individual sentence cannot be understood by the student, how can the nine thousand sentences in the novel, or whatever the count is, be understood? Are students really going to do close reading of all that when every sentence, just about, requires such reading if it is to be understood?
All that said, I have, over the years, often encountered the delight of watching a master teacher bring an exceptionally difficult text alive for a group of students. I believe, for example, that it’s possible for third graders to get a grip on and discuss, meaningfully, say, a sophisticated idea like Stoicism or the mind-body problem or the social construction of gender. But it takes a very special teacher to make that happen. Close reading of carefully selected texts can be one way into such rarified atmospheres. Too often, educational materials of the past few decades have almost completely ignored the texts themselves and have dealt, rather, with vacuities substituted for the texts themselves, reducing, for example, a complex text like The Red Badge of Courage into a blithering generalization—war is bad. But doing close reading of complex texts with students is difficult. It takes a lot of reading and learning on one’s own to develop that skill. A superb New Critic can often bring that complex text alive for students, but we’re not born New Critics. It takes a LOT of learning to develop that sort of facility and a lot of knowing one’s students to be able to figure out what, in that close analysis, can be supplied by the text itself, what has to be explained, and what can be ignored. Often the problem in accessing a text lies not in the text itself but in the presuppositions of the culture of the author, so simply doing close reading without providing background clarification (incidentally, as needed, in response to the text) will be insufficient.
This “close reading” approach has value, certainly. Classic texts are classic because they spoke to people across the ages, and it’s often best to let the texts speak for themselves in a session in which one goes carefully, bit by bit, through the text, revealing its wonders.
However, making every bit of our instruction into such exercises in New Criticism-style close reading strikes me as odd. Obviously, we can’t do that, and that’s why the Common Core folk speak of doing close reading of selected “anchor texts.” If kids are to become good readers and writers, they should read and write a lot on their own, which means that they should spend a lot of time with material that doesn’t require exegesis. In one of his videos, Mr. Coleman says that it should take weeks to do “Letter from the Birmingham Jail” with a group of students. Fine. MANY of the texts on this New York State Department list would require such extraordinarily close reading in order to be accessible at all. But if one were to read every text on this list that requires such reading in that way, there would be no time left for anything else, for, say, spending HUNDREDS OF HOURS TAKING TESTS, and every kid would have to remain in the 9th grade for several years.
I’ve concluded that the reason for the odd emphasis on New Criticism is that it is the mode of analysis most compatible with computer scoring, particularly of essays. If all evidence has to be within the text, the domain of possible answers is constrained. This also makes it easier to train human scorers as well, of course.
The problem with that, Tom, is, of course, that all the answers aren’t in the text. This is something that folks attempting to teach computers to do natural language processing figured out back in the 1960s. They started out thinking, this should be so difficult. Just give the program a lexicon and a parser and it will spit out translations or pass the Turing test. But they soon found that any reading of any text requires enormous amounts of background knowledge, and take that context away, and the text becomes uninterpretable. Consider the first few lines of Emerson’s “Brahma”:
If the red slayer thinks he slays,
Or the slain think he be slain,
They know not the subtle ways I keep
And turn and pass and turn again.
Simple words. Fairly simple syntax (introductory subordinate clause with conjoined verb phrases + main clause, also with conjoined verb phrases). But what the heck does it mean? Who is this red slayer? Who is speaking? How can it be possible that someone kills and yet doesn’t kill? that someone is killed and yet is not killed? What does it mean that the speaker keeps subtle ways? turns, passes, turns again? None of this will make any sense whatsoever unless the reader is familiar with the Hindu notions of changeable Maya, the world illusion, and the unchangeable underlying reality of God. And, that’s a difficult notion to explain to kids. Background knowledge, cultural circumstances, reader experience and predispositions–these all matter, and so simply attending to the text is not enough.
Well… the computer doesn’t have to understand the original text WRITE the essay, it just has to score it. It just has to study the patterns in examples that only refer to evidence from the original text. Which quotes are generally used in conjunction with certain words in the student’s answer in high scoring papers, etc.
It is not easy — which is a big competitive advantage for deep pocketed companies — but it is a more tractable problem than allowing students to refer to whatever history they do know, or other texts, or their own experiences, etc., which is definitely too much for computers to handle.
Tom, I wasn’t disagreeing with you. Far from it. I was just pointing out that while people might think that close reading is the kind most compatible with computerized scoring, they are sadly mistaken. Language is slippery, and what appears to one person to be a simple matter of referring to the text will be, for another, a matter of applying some esoteric bit of background knowledge. If a contemporary American poet writes of “the catastrophe–goat hair found in the goat cheese at Buckhead restaurant,” some kids aren’t going to know that goat cheese is commonly served in upscale restaurants; that Buckhead is an upscale part of Atlanta, Georgia; and without that knowledge, won’t know that this is a satirical comment and so be able to answer the question, The speaker makes a satirical reference to A. goat cheese, B. xxxxxx, C. xxxxx. D. xxxx.
As I mentioned elsewhere, I know of at least one example of a student who was ESL, couldn’t read well at all. The student simply copied a portion of the text from the selections that had the same word patterns as the questions and was able to be proficient on the test. The computer scoring looks for key words and phrases. The child didn’t have any idea what his answers said or meant. In many cases,”teaching to the test” is not necessarily about teaching concepts or facts. It is teaching students how to beat the system.
Even with the background information, and an understanding of that, the questions about the text will keep pouring out: If Brahma is the speaker and is unchanging, how can this speaker “turn and pass and turn again”? And that leads to more background information: Well, the world illusion, Maya, is also Brahma–Brahma’s dream. So, one can never, ever read a text in isolation. A text does not create its own little completely independent world. That’s one of the problems with the New Criticism and one of the reasons for various critical reactions to it, including Deconstruction and the New Historicism.
So, why do I mention these highfalutin terms–the New Criticism, Deconstruction, the New Historicism–in the context of a discussion of teaching K-12 kids? Because there are lessons to be learned from each that are applicable to our teaching. The New Criticism: read closely. Deconstruction: Question the assumptions made by the text, those categories of thought that the text assumes (male/female, good/bad, high/low, art/not art). New Historicism: How is your own background affecting your understanding of this text? These are not difficult notions. There are many ways into and out of texts. My point is that we shouldn’t dictate any one way for all purposes at all times in every classroom, for every group of kids, with every teacher. There are not and should not be any standardized kids, teachers, or teaching methods. These are all enormously variable and should be.
I agree completely. We were told that we could teach with our own skills, texts, and methods, but within a framework of new teaching methods and vocabulary. As time marched on, we were doing very similar things due to materials available. However, we do have some who don’t want to share their ideas. We were told by one team member that when his/her salary and job security depended on his/her students’ success. the door would be shut and there would be no sharing at all. This is another consequence of teacher evaluations being based on test scores. Team building, consensus, collaboration, shared ideas are all essential to help ALL the students succeed. Take that away and teachers will be competing against instead of helping each other. This is not a healthy environment for students.
Debbie, that sort of thing, which I am hearing a lot of these days, is just heartbreaking. What a difference it makes to have colleagues, people who have your back, who work with you, who share your values and concerns, who will work collaboratively toward goals. That that is being destroyed is just awful.